Someone to read my HAS essay?

Colleges and Universities A-Z Cornell University
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<p>I need opinions on my Hotel school essay. Though no RD applicants please. :)</p>

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<p>ED acceptee.</p>

<p>PM it over</p>

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<p>PMed it to you.Thanks!</p>

<p>Anyone else? Constructive criticism is always appreciated :).</p>

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<p>Hi
I’m a freshman in the hotel school, I’d be glad to take a look at it if you’d like.</p>