Someone wanna take a look at an essay? please?

Transfer Students
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<p>If someone can, I have a supplementary essay I dont particularly like ( I think its pretty bad) and I could use some guidance on it. I would appreciate any help.</p>

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<p>I will look at it but you must email it to me: <a href="mailto:brand_182@yahoo.com">brand_182@yahoo.com</a></p>

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<p>I sent it to you. Thank you for the help!!! FYI: its cornell supplement and im trying to get itno ILR</p>

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<p>I'll take a look at it as well. BTW whats ILR?</p>

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<p>its a college at cornell, Industrial and Labor Relations.</p>

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<p>Ohhh...okay.</p>

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<p>Should I just PM it to you or would you prefer an email? Also thank so much any lil help is very apreciated specially for a marginal applicant like myself</p>

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<p>You can PM it too me, I'm quite good on content.</p>

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<p>I got 2 PMs and none of them was your essay (I presume).</p>

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<p>The first one should of had my esssay in it and the second one was the topic because my essay was too long to fit both in it.</p>

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<p>I'd love to read. PM me</p>

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<p><a href="mailto:laneb2005@yahoo.com">laneb2005@yahoo.com</a></p>

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<p>Hey thanks everyone for the help but unfotunatly i dont think ill have time to read all the comments on my essay ull all have but thank you for offering to help.Unfortunatly, My moms car broke down and now im stuck as a driver. I gotta hurry and finish this!</p>