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<p>Have you considered adding a Languages section. I think i recall in another post that you speak spanish in addition to japanese? i would add a Language section and describe your proficiency for ex:
Fluent in XXX conversant in XXX</p>
<p>Can you describe tasks or activities you participated in as part of the honor societies? For instance did you tutor ,or fundraise ,or complete any community service as a member of the club?</p>
<p>I think I would highlight your position as a club officer by creating a section called leadership roles and palcing the sentence there</p>
<p>TK - This is what it would look like with the minor edits i suggested in previous post...............</p>
<p>OBJECTIVE:
To join your prestigious university, and further develop my education.</p>
<p>VOLUNTEER EXPERIENCE: </p>
<p>Contributed 80+ hours as a volunteer at Miami Metro Zoo. Provided information to, and taught visitors about the zoo animals. Answered all questions and acted as a tourguide for groups(or host or ambassador whatever your title is)</p>
<p>EXTRA CURRICULAR ACTIVITIES: </p>
<p>Member of American Technological Honor Society: 11th & 12 grade
Member of Japanese National Honor Society: 12th grade
Junior varsity wrestling: 10th grade</p>
<p>LEADERSHIP ROLES
Secretary of American Technological Honors society: 12th grade</p>
<p>SKILLS
Fluent in Spanish. Conversant (--or --Can read and write) in Japanese.
Leadership and communication abilities</p>
<p>thanks,you guys are the best!</p>