Decision: Rejected
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 2140 superscore (670 M, 730 CR, 740 W, 8 Essay)
ACT (breakdown): 36 superscore (36 R, 35 M, 35 S, 36 E, 10 Essay)
SAT II: n/a
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 4.0
Weighted GPA: 4.30
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): 1
AP (place score in parenthesis): APUSH (4), World History (4), English Language (5), Calculus (4), Chemistry (3), Physics (2)
IB (place score in parenthesis): n/a
Senior Year Course Load: Floral I (so I could be in FFA), Econ/Civics (required), Psychology, AP Bio, AP Lit, AP Stats
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): FFA Computer Applications Team 1st in State, AP Scholar with Distinction
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): FFA, ASB (senior class secretary), Academic Decathlon (starter), Jazz Ensemble (1st chair piano), Key Club, CSF (VP)
Job/Work Experience: A/P Payroll (clerical/secretary type job), Integrated Math I tutor
Volunteer/Community service: Key Club, CSF
Summer Activities: Work
Essays (rating 1-10, details):
Roommate: Very quirky, I talked about how I love puns and told a story about how I made a pun about mayonnaise, and ended saying “Don’t worry, I’ll make sure to ketchup on my puns, I only hope you’ll have mustard the courage to relish them by the time we meet.” 10 if they love silly jokes like the kind I make, probably a lot worse if they don’t.
Long essay: I’d say a solid 8-9. Talked about how I have severe eczema and basically how that’s prevented me from doing a lot of stuff with my life, but it also allowed me to discover what I love to do and am good at doing. The teacher who read over my essays said it was really good, and she was my ap lang teacher.
What matters: Probably a 6. I kinda rehashed the whole “I love to learn” thing that I talked about in my vitality essay, which I think I wrote better. This one talked about how I always ask questions.
Vitality: Maybe a 7-8? Better than my what matters essay (as I said). I talked about how I have never won anything in the Academic Decathlon yet but I keep trying.
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details):
Teacher Rec #1: 7 (I read it, didn’t have the best grammar in it as far as I thought but he definitely came across as sincere about how he thought I was a good student).
Teacher Rec #2: Didn’t read.
Counselor Rec: Didn’t read, probably somewhat generic though.
Additional Rec: From my piano teacher for an arts supplement, didn’t read.
Interview: n/a
Other
Applied for Financial Aid?: Yes
Intended Major: CS + Classics
State (if domestic applicant): CA
Country (if international applicant):
School Type: Public
Ethnicity: White (European)
Gender: Female
Income Bracket: 80,000-90,000
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): I asked a Stanford representative and they said it wasn’t a hook, but I am a female going into a scientific career.
Reflection
Strengths:
Weaknesses: Low SAT. Never did anything spectacular. Am from a small school in CA where what I have done is considered pretty great, but in comparison to places with more opportunities, I haven’t done much, so I’m not an impressive applicant.
Why you think you were rejected: Not good enough for Stanford, in the end. Too much going against me, too many other applicants who I guess were better.
Where else were you accepted/waitlisted/rejected: I applied REA so I won’t know any other college decisions until I find out about SJSU in late February.
General Comments:
I expected as much, with the low acceptance rate at all, but it still hurt a lot to know all my dreams of joint majoring and all that were crushed. I decided if I didn’t get into Stanford that I’d apply to Santa Clara University in hopes of getting a good merit scholarship from them (as a replacement for good financial aid I could have gotten from Stanford). Congratulations to everyone out there who got in, because I’m sure that in the end, you deserved it, and I hope you can all do great things with your life.
For me, though, it’s time to move on.
EDIT: I accidentally typed 2141 for my SAT superscore instead of 2140 somehow, whoops!
EDIT 2: After putting so much of my knowledge of myself into college apps, I’ve forgotten what I’ve done. Added two awards (they’re not super big but one is a state award and another is national, so yeah). I hope I haven’t forgotten anything else XD