Decision: Accepted
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 1580/2380 (800 CR, 780 M, 800 W)
ACT (breakdown):
SAT II: 800 Biology-Molecular, 790 English Literature
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 4.0
Weighted GPA: 4.3+ (haven’t checked in a while)
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): N/A
AP (place score in parenthesis): Art History 5, European History 5, Biology 5, English Language 5, Spanish Language 4, U.S. History 5
IB (place score in parenthesis):
Senior Year Course Load: AP Chemistry, AP Gov/Pol, AP Calc AB, AP English Literature, AP Comp Sci
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): National academic medals, national published poems, National Spanish Exam Medals, HOBY, few school things for social justice and learning, NMSF (not mentioned), TASP (not an award, but I loved it so much)
Subjective: (changed a few things to protect privacy)
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): Academic Decathlon (Captain, many medals) 9-12, STEM Club (co-President) 9-12, Writing (published poems, did NaNoWriMo twice, local awards, etc.) 9-12, Girl Scouts (regional leadership award, Silver) K-12, Family Responsibilities/lots of family issues led to my taking over a significant portion of my younger sibling’s education (I help with homework, assign extra projects and grade them, do summer reviews before school starts – poor dear) 10-12
Job/Work Experience: all online b/c family issues, make materials for 2 test prep curriculum firms during summer 10-11, personal essay editing business (help translate essays for international students, from our first language to English) 10-12
Volunteer/Community service: 6+ years at my local homeless shelter, Girl Scout activities (run events for younger girls)
Summer Activities: TASP!!! Community college courses sophomore year (all As), writing, HOBY, work, etc.
Essays (rating 1-10, details): I’m not in a position to judge my own work, but I liked them and my English teacher said it was very fresh and abstract, and I trust his opinion. There may or may not have been plant metaphors and discussions on cats; also, full disclosure of my passion for Costco bulk deals and wall decorating in the letter to my roommate.
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details): (giving an interval of 8-10 just in case)
Teacher Rec #1: My AP Euro and U.S. History teacher (sophomore/junior year) who wrote my rec letter for TASP
Teacher Rec #2: My chemistry honors teacher (sophomore year to the present) who also coaches Acadec and moderates STEM Club
Counselor Rec: She seemed hopeful of my chances and told me “my love of learning was truly genuine and infectious”
Additional Rec: N/A
Interview: N/A
Other:
Applied for Financial Aid?: Yes
Intended Major: Biology/Philosophy
State (if domestic applicant): CA
Country (if international applicant): USA
School Type: Private, religious (get financial aid)
Ethnicity: Southeast Asian/Pacific Islander
Gender: F
Income Bracket: lower middle class
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.):
Reflection: I am still in shock.
Strengths: My quirky essays, life story (family issues/sibling caretaking/language barrier/etc., but still I rise), commitment to my favorite activities and learning. I was satisfied with my application.
Weaknesses: Too varied array of activities, focus(?)
Why you think you were accepted/waitlisted/rejected: I poured my essence into my essays, and I could imagine myself looking back at me through the application’s words.
Where else were you accepted/waitlisted/rejected: First one… (hope it’s not the last, haha)
General Comments: I usually just lurk CC, but I am incredibly grateful for all the past threads and I wanted to give back. If you are reading this and stressed out about your chances, just know that you are a luminous human being and I believe that you can succeed anywhere that you attend. An acceptance is only a doorway into the future, and a deferral or a rejection does not define you (I know it’s a cliche, but it’s true).
Best wishes, and best of luck. Be yourself in the app, even if that self is a sci-fi aficionado who rants about singularity.