<p>Well, just finished my first draft. I feel like the ending is kind of weird. Also, I have another essay I wrote for the same topic. I don't know which one is better though...</p>
<p>Would someone care to read and give some feedback? Just no Stanford applicants.</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>Hey quick, so this one is different than the other one you showed me? About your personality? If it is, I can definitely let you know which I I like better. I really liked the other one, but who knows, maybe this one will be just as good or better. If you feel i can help, shoot a PM at me.</p>
<p>No, it's a different one, but I'll send you my revised personality one as well.</p>
<p>Send it over!!</p>
<p>Sure, I'd love to read it... and if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account... but I'd prefer a pm</p>
<p><a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>
<p>I would love to check it out, just pm me, if you still need more to look over it.</p>