Stanford Roomate Essay

<p>Can anyone read my essay for Stanford? The prompt is "Virtually all of Stanford's undergraduates live on campus. Write a note to your future roommate that reveals something about you or that will help your roommate - and us - know you better." The maximum word count was 250 and I hit 249. I would appreciate any advice and comments - preferably from veterans, but anyone is welcomed. I'll PM my essay to you.</p>