Stanford Roommate Essay - Need help evaluating humor!

<p>Hi! The prompt is: Virtually all of Stanford's undergraduates live on campus. Write a note to your future roommate that reveals something about you or that will help your roommate - and us - know you better. (250 words)</p>

<p>I wrote this essay in a lighthearted style with humor sprinkled throughout. I need help evaluating if the humor is over the top or falls flat on its face. My dad and sister "got" it, but my mom doesn't understand the style at all. Please help!</p>

<p>No high schoolers, por favor.</p>

<p>north_face already kindly read and offered input. No more readers required!</p>