Stanford Roommate essay- Read mine please?

So I wrote my Stanford Roommate essay about some hobbies and it shows two sides of my personality, my
humor and excitement. Can anyone read it and evaluate it? I think my essay makes me sound immature because of my excitement but I probably need other people to confirm. Thanks in advance!

I would love to read it. My D has to write one too.

I would love to help you evaluate it!

i’d love to read it. pm me it

MODERATOR’S NOTE: It’s a good idea to find someone who doesn’t have a low post count to help you with your essay.

I’ll read it for you! :slight_smile:

I’ll check it out.

@MaineLonghorn I second that.

I’d love to read it! I’m taking AP literature right now, so don’t worry XD .

I can give you some feedback. I already applied REA, and will hear back from Stanford in 2 weeks, so don’t worry about plagiarism,.