Statement of Purpose (SOP) Review for Public Health

<p>Hello Everyone:</p>

<p>I am a prospective applicant for SPHs and I am hoping to matriculate in 2012. Would anyone please give me any feedback on my sample SOP? Please message me if you are willing to review and provide me with constructive criticism. Please send me a private message with your e-mail so I can forward you my statement. I am also willing to exchange and reciprocate the favor. I was a Comparative Literature and Psychology double major so I do possess significant writing development experience</p>

<p>Just as a heads up: </p>

<p>My statement is rather lengthy and I fear that I am not as focused as I should be....I am applying for an MPH and then hopefully continue towards doctoral work. I have been heavily involved in teaching, clinical work, NGO work and professional work and am trying to convey my preparedness as succinctly and poignantly as possible. Thank you again and I really appreciate the favor. </p>

<p>Cheers</p>