Stereotypical Asian Essay. Critique por favor?

College Essays
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<p>Hey I just wrote my essay and wanted to know what people think about it? It's intended for top 25 and some Ivy Leagues.</p>

<p>It's actually not that stereotypical. Well atleast not of Asians, I think...</p>

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<p>Im willing to critique your essay and tell you what i think. PM me :)</p>

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<p>Sure! PM me</p>

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<p>I can read it. PM me</p>

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<p>yeah PM me if uwant</p>

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<p>yea pm me.</p>

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<p>lol sounds interesting ill read</p>

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<p>haha, what's stereotypical asian? I'm interested, pm me!</p>

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<p>PM me.. im curious lol</p>

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<p>pm me ill read it</p>

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<p>PM me, I will read it for you</p>

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<p>Sure, I'm also an Asian. PM me.</p>

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<p>Ill read it for you, PM me.</p>

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<p>i'll read it. i'm asian too lol. just pm me if you still need some critiquing</p>

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<p>I'm interested! PM me!</p>

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<p>Search on me, and if you like my recent advice, pm over. I will read</p>