<p>Pretty much my essay is a story of my life to describe experiences that made me want to become a doctor.
Is this a good idea? Also, people who've read it say it doesn't express my strengths enough, but I didn't mean for the essay to do that. I just wanted to write an essay on certain aspects of my life.</p>
<p>Bump pls I’m at the end of the line here</p>
<p>What was the prompt for the essay?</p>
<p>See the thing is wanting to write about a certain aspect of your lie is great, if it was a very unique and took a unique angle at it. Inspirations for wanting to being a doctor, well that just seems very trite and generic, and I’m show thw\e adcoms will have read anywhere between 10s to hundreds of essays like that. I can’t tell right off the bat that it’s boring as I haven’t read it, but just my two cents.</p>
<p>the prompt was topic of your choice</p>
<p>mde i know a lot of people probably do it but it’s not really boring because i throw in bits of humor and i have some actually exciting experiences, like shadowing a doctor during a gall bladder surgery</p>