Strong essay?

<p>Anyone out there willing to read my essay?
I really would love some strong critiques. </p>

<p>I will be happy to read it, if you like. (Parent here)</p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

<p>I messaged it to you</p>

<p>I can if you’re still looking.</p>

<p>thank you! I’ll send it right now</p>