<p>I am having trouble making my writing stand out. Is anyone willing to post or send me their essays or link to essays that you feel are particularly strong? Or if you're otherwise willing to read what I have written, please let me know.</p>
<p>Check the sites of Tufts, UVA, Connecticut College for essays that worked. EsaayEdge also has some successful essays posted. There are also a few threads full of essays that worked here on this site. Sorry, I am too fatigued to look them up for you now.</p>
<p>Last but not least, try to buy or borrow a book with sample essays.</p>