Supplement essay for Amherst

<p>Hello everyone.
I’m new to CC and currently planning to apply to Amherst class of 2018.</p>

<p>I have written a draft for the supplement essay for the prompt ‘Stereotyped beliefs have the power to become self-fulfilling prophesies for behavior’.</p>

<p>Can anyone have a look at it and give some suggestions?</p>

<p>Many thanks.</p>

<p>Oops class of 2015… sorry</p>

<p>i could look at it</p>

<p>I could look at it. I’ll be going to amherst this year. </p>

<p>I’d be happy to take a look and provide feedback </p>