Supplement Essay on topic of my choice

College Essays
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<p>Hello everyone!</p>

<p>I just finished my supplement essay on the topic other than the one I chose for the main application.</p>

<p>Is there anyone that would be willing to read it (and possibly even correct my grammar!) and tell me honest opinion about it?
By honest, I mean REALLY honest, I want to know what you think is bad and needs improvement (do not hesitate to be brutally honest), but also, what I should keep :)</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>Sure. go ahead and pm me.</p>

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<p>Sure thing, I’d be happy to edit it for you!</p>

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<p>more people want to read it? :)</p>

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<p>If you need any more readers, I’d be happy to offer my input.</p>