supplement essay?

<p>hello so i just finished my cornell essay for cals a few days ago </p>

<p>i was wondering if anyone would be willing to read it and give feedback / maybe help me delete 100 words (i went over the limit unfortunately)</p>

<p>its probably not the wisest idea to just dish out my essay so i'd feel most comfortable sending it to someone who was accepted to cornell or who is out of high school</p>

<p>just comment if you're interested in helping me and ill PM it to you</p>

<p>i would seriously appreciate it thank you again</p>