<p>Hey, I'm applying RD for Humec, majoring in Human Development, and I've written two versions of an essay for the supplement. </p>
<p>I was wondering if maybe anyone would please look them over and let me know which would be the best choice and maybe do some editing?</p>
<p>I'd appreciate it so much! and I'd love to do the same for anyone!
Thanks so much!</p>
<p>I just submitted my app. 
…applying for Biological Sciences in CAS. Would be willing to read yours, you can read mine if you like. PM me if you’re interested.</p>
<p>PM me. I’ll give them a read. I’m applying for transfer to ILR</p>
<p>Sure I have submitted mine already so I could help you.</p>
<p>pm me and i’ll send you the critique. thanks</p>
<p>feeel free to send it over
i’d <3 to offer my 2 cents :)</p>