Take a look at my essay please. Very rough draft

<p>Hey everyone,
I REALLY want to get into Yale, but I'll need help, so anyone who is willing to help look over my essay will be greatly appreciated. My grammer probably needs undergo huge fixes and repition and all will need help. My essay is already close to the 500 word limit. Please PM me and i will send you the essay. Thanks a bunch</p>

<p>sure i'll take a look if u want</p>