Take a lookie at my essay

Applying to College
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<p>Since everyone on CC is going stark mad writing college essays left from right in August, I was actually motivated to start my UC Berkeley one. The essay is the one which is to be the longest (600 words) for the 3 essay part. My idea is a bit off (much like my thinking). Anybody interested?</p>

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<p>I'll take a look if you like. PM it too me. Maybe you could look at mine?</p>

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<p>I will read. Just PM . will analyse.</p>

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<p>Sure, I'm bored at the moment and wouldn't mind seeing it.</p>

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<p>pm me if u still want some feedback</p>

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<p>Contact me if you want some feedback.</p>

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<p>you can PM me.</p>

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<p>I want to read it! I like weird essays.</p>

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<p>ill take a look at it. thanks</p>

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<p>i'll look at it, if you don't mind</p>

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<p>Sure. I'll look at it if you want me to.</p>

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<p>I'll read it.</p>

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<p>I'll be happy to read it, I am majoring in english; I might be able to help you the clarity of your essay. Bona fortuna</p>

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<p>pm it to me</p>

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<p>PM me tooo</p>

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<p>pm me up ..</p>

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<p>pm me .</p>

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<p>PM me, too.</p>

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<p>pm me please</p>

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<p>yeha sure pm me. And if you're up to it I would also like feedback on mine.</p>