Tear apart my essay!

<p>I'm looking for some harsh critics...any takers? I'm applying for the class of '14, btw.</p>

<p>Someone? Anyone? Please!!</p>

<p>I will! I know I don’t have a lot of posts, but I promise I’m not an essay thief, I’m just new.</p>

<p>ill take a look
im surprised you have one already</p>

<p>I’d be more comfortable with non-2014ers…</p>

<p>I’ll take a look. I applied already class of '13 and am nervous as hell because of it.</p>

<p>Edit: BTW, I already have likelies from Dartmouth and Duke for what it’s worth.</p>

<p>I will literally tear apart your essay for you.</p>

<p>I will. 10char</p>