Tear my CommonApp Essay apart!!!

College Essays
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<p>Anyone want to read my CommonApp essay</p>

<p>please only read if you will rip this thing apart</p>

<p>I just need people to critique</p>

<p>and tell me if it is strong enough, revealing ,specific, too long (it might be) etc.</p>

<p>Not sure if it matters to know where I am going because I don't even know yet but most likely no LACs and all top 50 schools most likely in the range of 10-40 usnews ranking that's just an estimate so you know the level I am looking for</p>

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<p>It’s better if you tell us which schools specifically you’re considering, but I’ll give it a read.</p>

<p>I’m pretty good with critique, although I can be too brutally honest sometimes…</p>

<p>Send it over.</p>

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<p>I’d be glad to help.</p>