<p>second draft of my common app essay. i got inspired and started writing one day, which led to the birth of this essay. I'm not sure if its very good.
please critique.
no 2010'ers</p>
<p>i’ll take a looksie and give some critique.
<a href=“mailto:NKunkel@ucsd.edu”>NKunkel@ucsd.edu</a></p>
<p>bump any one else? i need more readers</p>
<p>I would have read it, but no 2010 students? oh well…</p>