Tell me if these seem good

<p>I thought a good topic would be the "challenged a belief or idea" thing, and say how I began to question my own religious beliefs I was taught as a child, how it was always very confusing for me, and how I couldn't just accept what I was taught, and had to question further. I'm a bit concerned It could be offensive, but I think it could also highlight some of my good qualities of wanting to always learn more, and dig deeper into questions, and how it got me interested in physics theory, and science/math in general. Anyway, I'm a bit concerned it would offend my parents/ the admissions council..... Also, I'm concerned since it isn't really a physical "thing" that happened, more of just a change that happened, also it may be too universal. Anyway, what do you think?</p>

<p>It doesn’t sound like anything that would offend an admissions reader.</p>

<p>Hopefully not… What do you think of the topic, I think it may lean a little generic.</p>

<p>All topics are general until you fill in the details with specifics. Right now, from your description, yes it does sound generic. But that because you haven’t described WHY you started to challenge your religious beliefs, and WHAT you currently believe. As you start to write, keep asking yourself what is it about your decision that is different from anyone else’s that has gone through the same questioning of their religious beliefs. Remember, you need to write an essay that only you (and not hundreds of other students) can write. The details of your story will make your essay less generic.</p>

<p>Cool, yeah I feel I could make it less generic but may go for a new topic entirely</p>