Tell me if this is worth sending (optional short essay)

<p>I'm not a really good writer so I was wondering if anyone could let me know if my optional short essay (it's about a band) is even worth sending. I'm not sure if it says enough about me, and it's also really short as well. So if anyone could read over it and let me know their first impressions, thanks.</p>

<p>ill read it over</p>

<p>pm it, i'd love to read.</p>