<p>Finally completed my common app essay! Now I just need some advice on how to improve it and I would appreciate it if anyone can find anything wrong with it. If you can offer suggestions/critique, just leave a little note here and I'll pm you the essay. </p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>hey i would like to read it pm or email me <a href="mailto:thatkidbrb@tmail.com">thatkidbrb@tmail.com</a></p>
<p>I’ll read!</p>
<p>Pm it over!</p>
<p>ill read and critique, pm me</p>
<p>Just PM it over, I will give critique it and give a feedback.</p>
<p>I’m gonna be the jerk that butts into your thread and asks: are any of you willing to read my essay too?</p>
<p>and feel free to PM yours to me. i’ll critique</p>
<p>I would love to</p>
<p>No current seniors/disreputable posters, please.</p>