The Common App Short Answer Essay?

<p>So I've written my short answer essay, but I'm still unsure of how it sounds/reads. Would anyone be willing to read my 144 words and give me some advice or feedback? I would really appreciate it!</p>

<p>I'll read yours if you read mine?</p>

<p>Bump, anyone else?</p>

<p>Sure, feel free to PM it.</p>