<p>For roderick:</p>
<p>Decision: Rejected</p>
<p>Objective:[ul]
[<em>] SAT I (breakdown): CR 740, MR 710, WS 800 Essay 11
[</em>] ACT:
[<em>] SAT II: Math II 740, Physics 760, Chemistry 750
[</em>] Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): Not listed. School doesn’t work on GPA system.
[<em>] Weighted GPA:
[</em>] Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): Top 8%
[<em>] AP (place score in parentheses):
[</em>] IB (place score in parentheses):
[<em>] Senior Year Course Load: A Level Subjects-Physics (A), Chemistry(B), Math (A), Biology (A), Psychology (B)
[</em>] Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): [/ul]</p>
<p>Subjective:[ul]
[li] Extracurriculars (place leadership in parentheses): [/li] Debates Club (President) (Yr 12):
1.Captain of Parliamentary Style Debate team.
2.Participation in MUNs.
3.Participation in Declamations.</p>
<pre><code> Drama Club (Vice President) (Yr 11):
1.Helped organize Annual School Play and worked in many capacities backstage.
English-Literary Society (General Secretary) (Yr9):
1.Consisted of English theater, debate and newsletter.
</code></pre>
<p>[<em>] Job/Work Experience: None.
[</em>] Volunteer/Community service:
[li] Summer Activities:[/ul]</p>[/li]
<p>Writing (Rate Quality on 1-10 Scale; 10 as Best):[ul]
[<em>] Essays (Include Subjects):[list] Williams Essay was about how your origins make you who you are. Described a scene outside my grandparents’ house in Inner City Lahore. One of my best college essays.
[</em>] Common App Main: About starting out as a public speaker, messing up my first chance and picking myself up again. Would give it an 8.
[<em>] EC Short Answer: About my year as vice-president of the Drama Club and the Play that I worked backstage for. Would rate it 7.
[</em>] Other(s):[/ul]
[<em>] Teacher Recommendations: Wrote them myself, working with my teachers. That how things work at my school You write the recommendations and the teachers sign it. Tried to make them as realistic as possible and both teachers agreed with them.
[</em>] Counselor Rec: Principal wrote this one. Good-ish. Would give it a 7.
[<em>] Additional Rec:
[</em>] Interview:
[li] Art Supplement: [/list]</p>[/li]
<p>Other[ul]
[<em>] Date Submitted App:10/28/2009
[</em>] State (if domestic applicant):
[<em>] Country (if international applicant): Pakistan.
[</em>] School Type: Private. Single-sex. Not very competitive. Only student applying to the states out of a class of 150. Also, only student to study more than four subjects.
[<em>] Ethnicity: South-Asian
[</em>] Gender: Pakistan
[<em>] Income Bracket: <$16000
[</em>] Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.):[/ul] None.</p>
<p>Reflection[ul]
[<em>] Strengths: Essays. Sat 1 Scores. Extra-Curriculars.
[</em>] Weaknesses: Teacher recommendations maybe? Maybe they could tell I had written them myself. School Transcripts (An A was pretty hard to get on the mock-papers for A levels our teachers used to make for us. Mostly B’s and C’s. Final A levels result was 3 As and 2 Bs).
[<em>] Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: Because God has other plans for me
[</em>] What would you have done differently?: [/ul] Listed more ECs. I didn’t list them all. Also, I didn’t put my community service experience on my application. Would want to put that down the next time.</p>
<p>General Comments: Just this quote by rumi.
“Don’t grieve. Anything you lose comes round in another form.”</p>
<p>Also, congratulations Class of 2014. You probably deserved this more than I did.</p>