The Second Draft: A.), B.), C.), D.), or E.)

College Essays
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<p>I have my second draft of my college application essay. I like it much more than the first, but it still needs some help. That is where y'all come in!I want you to give essay one of the letters below</p>

<p>A.)Cliche... find a new topic
B.)Just blah, needs much work
C.)It has potential
D.)None of the above(elaborate on this one)
E.)(this one is new) It is getting good, but needs help.</p>

<p>Just leave a post and I willPM it to you. Thanks for your time! :)</p>

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<p>Hey, you can PM it to me if you’d like.</p>

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<p>^ For those, like hereicome09, who are close-minded and not tolerant, don;t bother asking to see the essay. It contains some very sinful material, such as references those who shall not be named.</p>

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<p>I would like to read it.</p>

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<p>PM it over and I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>sure PM. ill gladly read it over.</p>

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<p>I say C in general. :]</p>

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<p>Sure, on this sunny day I’ll read it, before the heat wave comes. Please PM.</p>

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<p>I’ll read (10char)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you want</p>

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<p>i’ll read it!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it! Feel free to PM me…</p>

<p>class of '08, in case you care!</p>

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<p>lol everyone’s interested b/c it’s racyyyy…haha kidding pm me!</p>

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<p>PM me, I’d love to read!</p>

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<p>pm me ! I’d love to help you out</p>

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<p>b
bu
bum
bump
bump!</p>

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<p>moi…oh btw if you give me all your drafts I can give you a more complete picture and critique..</p>