"The Squawk"- Yale Supplement. Criticism Welcome

<p>Hey guys! I plan on sending this supplement in pretty soon, so I wanted a couple of final opinions before I do. I would prefer nit-picky and harsh criticism :). Also willing to trade looks at college essays.</p>

<p>go ahead and pm it to me ill let u know what i think! :)</p>

<p>PM me! I already applied SCEA, but I’m more than happy to help a fellow CCer out</p>

<p>You can PM me. I did SCEA at Yale so I’m already done with my Yale application! :slight_smile:
I would like it if you can go through another essay of mine though!</p>

<p>Send it over if you want. I’ll try to get back to you in 24 hours.</p>

<p>I can read it for you. PM me if you want. Im not applying to yale. Brown is my dream and i already wrote essays I am proud of. Ill let you know what i think.</p>

<p>PM me, Yale SCEAer here.</p>

<p>I’ll take a look if you’d like.</p>

<p>me .</p>

<p>I’ll take a look, I’m a college sophomore</p>