These writing questions:

<p>1) 725/21:
Unfortunately, the opening of the new complex, previously scheduled for next September, would be delayed for several motnhs because of construction difficulties. No error</p>

<p>( I really don't know how to underscore parts. They say the answer was "would be". I dont know why)</p>

<p>2) 26 on the same page.
Professor Chen repeated her point that the hero, if given the chance to relive the moment, would choose to do it. No error.</p>

<p>They say error was in "do it". Why can't we reason "it" replaces" the moment"?</p>

<p>3) 726 # 31</p>

<p>.... (1) She says that poor programming on the part of the network is one of the reasons she has felt the need to direct our young minds to other, more engaging avenues. (2) Imagine that her speculation is not only an expression of parental concern for a child's welfare but also an outlet for her creative mind.</p>

<p>The sentence (2) is the sentence BB asks for:
In context, which of the following should be inserted at the beginning of [sentence 2]:
A) after all
b) in fact
c) you should
d) I like to
e) then</p>

<p>The answer is d. Why not c?</p>

<p>In sentance one 725/21 ,you should replace ‘‘would’’ with ‘will’’
In sentance 26 , ‘‘to do it’’ sounds weird ,becase it is not clear what will he choose to do</p>

<p>About the improving passages question,we cant explain why the answer is d but not c only by reading the short excerpt you have copied.Read the whole text ,and if other sentances start with ‘’ I ‘’ ,this one should also start with ‘‘I’’</p>

<p>hi,

  1. what if it’s a story told in the past
    2)They say error was in “do it”. Why can’t we reason “it” replaces" the moment"?
  2. hardly any other sentences start w/ “I”</p>