<p>i wrote</p>
<li>i could not take many aps because 3 yrs of highschool i </li>
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<p>moved three times in a year, so prerequisite was different</p>
<li>i couldn’t do 11th grade because by school district law, </li>
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<p>i’m too old to be in 11th grade so i moved into 12th</p>
<li>i had to go to korea middle of 11th grade because my father</li>
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<p>was sick and really needed to be taken care</p>
<p>is this al right ???is this how u write it?</p>
<p>wait... you wrote about all 3 of those things?</p>
<p>isn't OPTIONAL ESSAY to write what u had hardship in highschool?</p>
<p>whats the prompt? if it's a topic of your choice then talk about whatever, if not, stick to what it asks (be creative of course)</p>
<p>oh i'm sorry </p>
<p>it's not like long essay where u have to show who u r</p>
<p>it's just saying if something has affected your academic performance, write it.........its in UIUC application........i 'm sorry~~</p>
<p>but can i write like that? is it ok? also can i use it in all applications as well?</p>
<p>I think you should definitely go more in depth on just one of those things, otherwise it sounds like you're just trying to make excuses. if other apps ask the same thing then go for it.</p>
<p>does anyone doing UIUC app? cuz it says if something has affected your academic performance, write it.....and
i 'm wondering if i'm writing like that</p>