This essay took me 6 months to write..

College Essays
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<p>6 months? Dang. I'd love to read it.</p>

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<p>Mine took about 6 months too! I'd like to read it, if that's okay with you.</p>

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<p>It seems like you have a lot of bites, but if you still need another reader, send it on over. I'm good for grammar/structure stuff.</p>

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<p>PM me will read and reply to you</p>

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<p>pm me please</p>

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<p>Hi, red remote:
What a writer you are ! The best essay I have read since this admission season started is yours. Not many of my own students can be compared against you. Your description is beautiful, and the language is mature. It shows your sincerity and coherence both in meaning and structure.
However, since I did not have the prompt, I assume it is one of the influence topics. You need to describe how that specific influence has exerted his strong effect on you and how he has helped shape who you are. A college essay is not a language art competition, and it must reflect truly who you are.
Hope this comment can shed some light on your further editing.</p>

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<p>indeed. crazy writing style though-the first that I have actually enjoyed reading and not skimmed over. I don't see why the ADCOMS will not do the same-stop and savor your essay rather than skimming it like most.</p>

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<p>PM it over please. I'll take a gander.</p>

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<p>send it over ill take a look. pm me</p>

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<p>pm me!! i'lll critique it !! i have to see an essay which has taken 6months to write ;]</p>

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<p>i am glad to hear you enjoyed it :)</p>

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<p>i'd like to read it as well, i'll message you with a critique</p>

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<p>pm it over ill critique it</p>

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<p>I'd like to take a look at it too</p>

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<p>I would love to see an essay which took so long to write.</p>

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<p>i am really curious to read this essay.</p>

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<p>Yeah, you've peaked my interest.</p>

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<p>i will read it as well :)</p>

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<p>i'd like to read also if you could pm me please</p>

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<p>i spent a month tweaking an essay and finally finished only to realize it sucked. i then wrote a MUCH better essay in 30 minutes. the quality of my writing is inversely proportionate to how much time i spend on it.</p>

<p>oh and id love to read it and critique it.</p>