<p>IMO, your pov is not clearly stated; I can surmise what it is, but that takes too much work as a reader.</p>
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<p>Sure I can deny it. By repeatedly throwing a football around, Peyton Manning is bound to complete plenty. Michael Phelps has done rather well by repeating his boring lap routines. (This sentence by itself and a par lead-in just makes no sense.)</p>
<p>Do consider the boring, 5-par concept and link the paragraphs together.</p>