Thought-provoking essay in desperate need of editing (due in 3 days)

Applying to College
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<p>Any comments, suggestions, or overall feedback will be greatly appreciated. Ask and I shall PM</p>

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<p>mine too are thought provokin send them!</p>

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<p>I'll take a look.</p>

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<p>i'll look at it too</p>

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<p>i'll give some feedback</p>

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<p>I've asked so many people to edit my essays that I might as well give back a little :) Feel free to send it to me.</p>

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<p>Send to me</p>

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<p>bumpity bump</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>pm it to me</p>

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<p>ill read em</p>

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<p>anyone else? i need serious editors</p>

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<p>I'll do it tomorrow.</p>

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<p>If I have a chance, I'll read it. Send it over :)</p>