Thoughts/Editing for my common app essay?

<p>reply and I'll send it to you. Any thoughts are appreciated.</p>

<p>I'd be glad to help.</p>

<p>Bump ... anyone else?</p>

<p>Sure. I'll edit it. PM me.</p>

<p>Ill be glad to help.
Ill try and edit too if possible</p>

<p>I'm torn between two essays, can anyone help me pick one out?</p>