Thoughts on topics?

College Essays
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<p>I greatly appreciate anyone who is willing to give their opinions!</p>

<p>My first topic would be talking about my challenges with piano - especially because those around me in our family friend circle were amazing - and how that undermined my self-confidence and contributed to my once shy nature. This would then dovetail into me talking about how a week long business camp during my freshmen year helped me break out of my shell.</p>

<p>My second topic would be a more..."interesting" (weird) topic. Since I was young, everyone would comment on how long my eyelashes are and female classmates would complain that theirs' weren't as long as mine (I'm a guy.) This kind of would be a more than meets the eye piece.</p>

<p>My third topic would be about my love of short shorts - I'm a long distance runner - and how my liking them grew more with my sense of individuality and outgoing nature, despite what others would say about me.</p>

<p>IDK. I feel like writing this down helped me a bit, but what do you guys think? Opinions would be super, super appreciated! I think a common theme is me becoming more outgoing and not just being a bookwormish kind of guy?</p>

<p>If you read all of that, I love you. =)</p>

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<p>I think that you could write a very strong essay about your challenges with playing the piano. By putting in details of gaining self confidence can make the essay strong. It is also a factor that the essay reader is going to be looking for. By no means am a professional about this. I am also trying to decide between my 2 topics. If you do not mind, it will be greatly appreciated if you can read my thread on what topic should I choose. Thanks.</p>

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<p>I actually already did :slight_smile: Like four minutes before you happened along my thread! Thanks!</p>

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<p>First one sounds nice! It’s like the essay I’m in the middle of writing! Sucks being the only ‘ugly’ in a family of pretties D: Second is interesting though; I would definitely want to read the second one if you can make it as humorous as you make it sound here!</p>