Too Cheesy?

College Essays
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<p>I loved my essay but now i cringe everytime i read it so please look it over for me? and let me know your thoughts?</p>

<p>greatly appreciated and i will read yours too if you want. thanks so much!</p>

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<p>i'll read yours if you read mine. :)</p>

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<p>i'll read urs!</p>

4

<p>you can pm me</p>

5

<p>i'll read urs! and if i finish i'll send u mine soon</p>

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<p>pm it over</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>pm it - - I'd love to help!</p>