Too much of a sob story?

<p>I have a lot of essays. From common app to supplements, I've written around 10 essays so far. The one I'm worried about is the common app. I wrote about being adopted and I feel like it's too much of a sob story. I have a google doc for it, so if you are willing to read it, can you send me an inbox message with your gmail email? </p>

<p>Thank you so much in advanced. </p>

<p>Send it to me through PM</p>