**Topic A essay**

Colleges & Universities A-Z The University of Texas at Austin
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<p>Would anyone like to read my essay in response to Topic A ("someone who has influenced you") on the TxCommonApp??</p>

<p>I could use lots of constructive criticism!!</p>

<p>Keep in mind that I'm applying for the Plan II program (whose admission decisions are 40% based on essays)</p>

<p>Thanks in advance!</p>

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<p>i can, pm me</p>

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<p>Just curious, are you a 2009 applicant? I’m not comfortable sharing any information with this year’s group :/</p>

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<p>i already sent, its ok</p>