Topic of leadership essay

Can somebody read my essay and tell me whether my topic is OK to write about? I have to write about an instance when I demonstrated leadership and positively influenced others. But it is definitely controversial and most people are telling me to change the topic. I think it is OK but I want a more professional/experienced opinion

@aymaro I’m not professional, but I am experienced with essay editing I’d say. I read a lot of essays and nitpickily edit them because I like editing lol PM me?

Sure just pm me

I’m game also, if you want another opinion.

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