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OK so for one of my scholarship essays I have to discuss one of my research experiences and what the results were - I’d really like to write about studying my religion and culture and the insight I gained about how most of what I’d been taught growing up were incredibly biased and cannot be backed up. Yet, I’m worried that the topic is too controversial and while not offensive, perhaps too personal?

Well, if its a personal experience then i would say go for it. You’re supposed to write about something you’ve learned. I don’t see why anyone would have a problem with it, they’re getting to know you.

I hope so. Thanks for the input!