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Colleges and Universities A-Z Brown University
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<p>female nyc
SAT IIs- 800 790 800 800</p>

<p>GPA- 95.8 rank- not good 75/800</p>

<p>AP - world history 4 ap bio 5 ap psycology 5 ap american 5
recommendations- they will be excellent im giving it to the best teachers who loved me</p>

<p>I have a problem though during freshman grade i recieved some poor gades- a few 70’s and a 65 down from the 98’s i got in 8th grade(its on my transcript because they were high school courses)</p>

<p>National merit- scorring 230 on psats</p>

<p>I’m south asain-bangladesh</p>

<p>VARRSITY- SOCCER two year</p>

<p>I volunteered at coney island hospital for 140 hours, i work at my college counselers office, I voluntteer for 10 hrs on weekends at Ny downtown hospital, im a stem cell research at columbia medical center , jewish museum of heritage intern, ive worked in a hospital during freshman yr as a job, volunteer for enviornment cautions, scholors program for junior fellows- we had to do a big project with help on doctors etc now we go on trips to participate and learn in labs, i tutor kids at my old elementary for free
in school - HOPS (help out poverty stricken), Writing club, math team, debate team drama club SING (play put on , competetion btwn better show, freshman-soph vs. juniors vs seniors), model UN, bio med society
This year I raised 1,500 dollars for 3 fundraisers I organized to help starving children in ghana and I am having a fundraiser to buy an acre of endangered rainforest</p>

<p>Awards-Academic awards= 10,000 scholorship won from an essay contest, Arista (like an honor society), archon (people with a lot of community service, Hoping to be intel semi finalist, national merit (, Christ Bozes High School Medical Essay award 500 dollars, The Laureates of Tomorrow - Nobel Essay Contest</p>

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<p>lol, a 95.8 gives you a rank of 75?? wow, talk about grade inflation. if you had a 95.8 in my school, you'd have the highest GPA of all time, get a full academic scholarship to Brown, with an added masseuse and a falafel cart outside your freakin dorm giving you discounts on nice falafel, hummus and tabouleh wraps, with a nice tahini dipping sauce. man, i love falafel. how bout you?</p>

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<p>in my school theres too many kids the person whos number 1 has a 102 and the person ahead of me has like .02 more points</p>

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<p>do you go to school in a redneck, i mean, rural area? do you guys not have falafel carts?</p>

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do you go to school in a redneck, i mean, rural area? do you guys not have falafel carts?

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<p>I think the OP lives in NYC... not very rural.</p>

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<p>its in the city def. not redneck yo. like a lot of asains and whites too though</p>

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<p>hey, do you guys have falafel carts?</p>

<p>and if you do, do they have a </p>

<p>falafel, tablouleh, hummus and grape leaves wrap? ive been trying to find those.
i love falfel.</p>

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<p>go away you chornay</p>

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<p>you look like a serial joiner (of clubs, i mean.) it's impressive that you are in so many clubs and have done all those commserve projects, but it also looks a little contrived. i think for you the important thing is to weed out the activities which do not mean anything to you (there must be a few), and DO NOT MENTION THEM at all. i'm serious. colleges see that transcript all the time, with way too many extracurriculars to be believable. only mention the ones that really make you shine. also make sure the ones you choose back up your story about yourself. if you're interested in medicine, tell them about the research and hospital volunteering and use math club and science team to back it up. don't just stick debate team and model un in there. It would really look like you didn't commit yourself to a few activities, which is always bad.</p>

<p>on the other parts of what you posted, i would say that your rank is decent, i mean at least youre in the top 10%. The rank and transcript are much more important than the gpa. the SAT 2's are good, but they don't factor in much. the AP's are also good but they factor in even less. What will be helpful is that it looks like you will do pretty well on the SAT I, so that will help.</p>

<p>Make sure your essays aren't contrived. As an asian girl i would suggest you don't write about medicine and the hospital unless its your ONLY passion and you think you can put an interesting twist on it. make it simple, detailed, and succinct.</p>

<p>i assume you might also be interested in other prestigious schools as well, and i'll tell you that freshman year matters very very little. if you'r applying to stanford, they don't even ask for your freshman year grades. trust me, this means they don't care. as long as you're on an upward trend now i'm sure it will be fine.</p>

<p>in the end you may have a great shot but its still just a shot. you never know with the ivy league.</p>

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<p>wow thank you. i forgot to put the sat score up there -- 2370</p>

<p>and i do model un because i am passionate about whats going on in the world and how i can help because ive raised a lot o money and organized fundraisers for things</p>

<p>thank you so much</p>

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<p>Bumpbumpbumpbump</p>

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<p>falafelfalafelfalafelfalafel</p>