<p>The question which was to be answered in the essay was "why do you want to transfer" noting that they wished you to write it in such a way that they could better get to know you.</p>
<p>Short on time, I managed to excuse a lack of specificity for trying to let them get to know me. My stats are top notch, and I don't have anything to add but I'm given the opportunity to rewrite my essay. (mainly got waitlisted because of trying to transfer after my sofomore year).</p>
<p>I'm lacking reasons to transfer, but I don't want to give them a list. I would appreciate any suggestions for writing style, format, ideas, hooks that will still fit the specific point of the essay. I'm just sure how to go about it</p>