Transfer Common app essay: wanna read/edit?

Transfer Students
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<p>I am having trouble with my common app essay for transfer which is just:
Please provide a statement (250 words minimum) that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve.</p>

<p>Can anyone read it and edit/ let me know comments?</p>

2

<p>I'll take a look at it.</p>

3

<p>PM me, I'll look it</p>

4

<p>sure, lets see</p>

5

<p>just pm me, i would like to help</p>

6

<p>I'll read it</p>

7

<p>ill read it also if u want. Ill look at grammar and give suggestions</p>

8

<p>I'll glance at it. :]</p>

9

<p>I'll critique if you want.</p>