Transfer CommonApp Essay

College Essays
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<p>Hi!
I was wondering if anyone could revise/read my transfer essay for commonapp? It's kind of informal but it has all the points I want to get across, I was wondering if anyone could revise it to perhaps a more formal essay and what I could do to emphasize my points further.</p>

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<p>i can give you some feedback on it if you want to send it privately.</p>

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<p>Hi! Thanks I PM’d it (:</p>

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<p>Feel free to send it over.</p>