Transfer Essay Help -- Will Someone Please Edit?

<p>Especially, those who are well-versed in what Chicago <em>might</em> be looking for. I just finished a rough draft and before I revisit it I'd like to have someone look at it. Any help would be truly appreciated.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>I may not be THAT well-versed in what Chicago may be looking for--but I was thinking of applying before my parents said no. So, I do know a little. Just a btw, I'm a senior who is 100% done with apps (just waiting).</p>

<p>I can help with general editing though. I"m a good editor.</p>