Transfer Essay - I Want Your Opinion

<p>I would appreciate it immensely if someone may critique my transfer essay. Rate it, check for grammar, content, etc. and give me any opinion/advice you can. I really want to make this essay perfect. I really want a better education in the field I wish to pursue and so I am aiming pretty high. </p>

<p>Thank you so much for your time and consideration.</p>

<p>Send it over my friend!</p>

<p>Thank you so much.
Is anybody else willing? I would appreciate a variety of dense opinion.</p>

<p>I’d be willing to read it.</p>

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<p>Ill take a look as well</p>

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<p>PM me please. I am happy to read it.</p>