<p>Can anyone look over my transfer essay ? I would like some advice about how strong it is and if its showing not telling</p>
<p>are you still looking? you can message it to me if you like.</p>
<p>Can anyone look over my transfer essay ? I would like some advice about how strong it is and if its showing not telling</p>
<p>are you still looking? you can message it to me if you like.</p>