Transfer essay

Hello CC’s,

I am applying to colleges for fall 2017 as a Transfer applicant. I just finished up on my common app transfer essay, and I was hoping to ask if anyone here can possibly spare some time to review my essay. I would prefer honest criticism.

Thank you!

I would love to help you!

id be happy to help!

i am also a prospective fall 2017 transfer student though so if you dont want me to take a look at it i understand (im transferring from community college though if that makes a difference)

@otoribashi Hey, I have to write an essay for a scholarship (transferring from a Community college) and I was wondering if you can assist me with some areas that I can use advice on. I’d really appreciate it! Thanks in advance

@Sheroman2020III I just finished with my own transfer essay. Would be glad to help look over yours!

@dkpark9095 Hey could you help me out/ provide advice in writing my transfer essays?

@Sheroman2020III sure feel free to pm me

@anoncs feel free to pm me